--- a/blob1.tex	Sun Nov 01 20:29:33 2009 +0000
+++ b/blob1.tex	Sun Nov 01 20:29:41 2009 +0000
@@ -36,14 +36,9 @@
 \begin{itemize}
 \item Some sections are missing.
 \item Many sections are incomplete.
-In some cases the incompleteness is noted, in some cases not.
-\item Some sections have been rewritten, but the older, obsolete version of
-the section has not been deleted yet.
+In most cases the incompleteness is noted, but occasionally it isn't.
 \item Some sections were written nearly two years ago, and are now outdated.
-\item Some sections have not been proof-read.
 \item There are not yet enough citations to similar work of other people.
-\item Due to multiple authors and multiple, disconnected episodes of writing,
-the various parts do not cohere as well as they should. 
 \end{itemize}
 Despite all this, there's probably enough decipherable material
 here to interest the motivated reader.