# HG changeset patch # User Scott Morrison # Date 1309389671 25200 # Node ID f38558decd51b471df1d55aceac6852dabd41ef4 # Parent 029f73e2fda69cb4bfa072eed575665824e4fcdf typos diff -r 029f73e2fda6 -r f38558decd51 text/a_inf_blob.tex --- a/text/a_inf_blob.tex Wed Jun 29 16:17:53 2011 -0700 +++ b/text/a_inf_blob.tex Wed Jun 29 16:21:11 2011 -0700 @@ -412,7 +412,7 @@ \begin{proof} The proof is again similar to that of Theorem \ref{thm:product}. -We begin by constructing chain map $\psi: \cB^\cT(M) \to C_*(\Maps(M\to T))$. +We begin by constructing a chain map $\psi: \cB^\cT(M) \to C_*(\Maps(M\to T))$. Recall that the 0-simplices of the homotopy colimit $\cB^\cT(M)$ diff -r 029f73e2fda6 -r f38558decd51 text/evmap.tex --- a/text/evmap.tex Wed Jun 29 16:17:53 2011 -0700 +++ b/text/evmap.tex Wed Jun 29 16:21:11 2011 -0700 @@ -351,7 +351,7 @@ of blob diagrams that are small with respect to $\cU$. (If $f:P \to \BD_k$ is the family then for all $p\in P$ we have that $f(p)$ is a diagram in which the blobs are small.) This is done as in the proof of Lemma \ref{small-blobs-b}; the technique of the proof works in families. -Each such family is homotopic to a sum families which can be a ``lifted" to $\Homeo(X)$. +Each such family is homotopic to a sum of families which can be a ``lifted" to $\Homeo(X)$. That is, $f:P \to \BD_k$ has the form $f(p) = g(p)(b)$ for some $g:P\to \Homeo(X)$ and $b\in \BD_k$. (We are ignoring a complication related to twig blob labels, which might vary independently of $g$, but this complication does not affect the conclusion we draw here.) diff -r 029f73e2fda6 -r f38558decd51 text/ncat.tex --- a/text/ncat.tex Wed Jun 29 16:17:53 2011 -0700 +++ b/text/ncat.tex Wed Jun 29 16:21:11 2011 -0700 @@ -206,8 +206,8 @@ We do not insist on surjectivity of the gluing map, since this is not satisfied by all of the examples we are trying to axiomatize. If our $k$-morphisms $\cC(X)$ are labeled cell complexes embedded in $X$ (c.f. Example \ref{ex:traditional-n-categories} below), then a $k$-morphism is -in the image of the gluing map precisely which the cell complex is in general position -with respect to $E$. On the other hand, in categories based on maps to a target space (c.f. Example \ref{ex:maps-to-a-space} below) the gluing map is always surjective +in the image of the gluing map precisely when the cell complex is in general position +with respect to $E$. On the other hand, in categories based on maps to a target space (c.f. Example \ref{ex:maps-to-a-space} below) the gluing map is always surjective. If $S$ is a 0-sphere (the case $k=1$ above), then $S$ can be identified with the {\it disjoint} union of two 0-balls $B_1$ and $B_2$ and the colimit construction $\cl{\cC}(S)$ can be identified @@ -999,7 +999,7 @@ \item in the $A_\infty$ case, actions of the topological spaces of homeomorphisms preserving boundary conditions and collar maps (Axiom \ref{axiom:families}). \end{itemize} -The above data must satisfy the following conditions: +The above data must satisfy the following conditions. \begin{itemize} \item The gluing maps are compatible with actions of homeomorphisms and boundary restrictions (Axiom \ref{axiom:composition}). @@ -2410,7 +2410,7 @@ This will allow us to define $\cS(X; c)$ independently of the choice of $E$. First we must define ``inner product", ``non-degenerate" and ``compatible". -Let $Y$ be a decorated $n$-ball, and $\ol{Y}$ it's mirror image. +Let $Y$ be a decorated $n$-ball, and $\ol{Y}$ its mirror image. (We assume we are working in the unoriented category.) Let $Y\cup\ol{Y}$ denote the decorated $n$-sphere obtained by gluing $Y$ and $\ol{Y}$ along their common boundary.