--- a/text/intro.tex	Sun Jun 27 19:04:53 2010 -0700
+++ b/text/intro.tex	Mon Jun 28 08:54:36 2010 -0700
@@ -68,8 +68,6 @@
 
 The relationship between all these ideas is sketched in Figure \ref{fig:outline}.
 
-\nn{KW: the previous two paragraphs seem a little awkward to me, but I don't presently have a good idea for fixing them.}
-
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 \begin{figure}[!ht]